Stumbling

A Poem by Dayran

For submission to Tovli's Ten words

Stumbling

A hobo is a part

Like history spoken in past tense

In a universe that began with a worm

Cooked without oil

In an iron skillet

Baked bread and was fine-dined

But stumbles as he speaks

And we ask ... why?

© 2015 Dayran

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Tovli

I like the "tease" of the poem and the flow. It has a didactic message, yet is playful. nice job.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Helen Crutchett

LOL....I'm loving all the different "takes" on the 10/40 words!

"A worm cooked without oil! " OMG.....so funny! Thanks for submitting this to Tovli's contest!

Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on March 27, 2015
Last Updated on March 27, 2015

Author

Dayran

Malacca, Malaysia

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' Akara Mudhala Ezhuththellaam Aadhi Bhagavan Mudhatre Ulaku ' Translation ..... All the World's literature, Is from the young mind of the Original Experiencer. .. more..