It Came to Pass

Moving On

 

                       

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

                        Its as if its been ages since I knew,

                        That we toil at something,

                        While reaching for something else, 

                        Absent minded almost, in dreams.

                        Then someone suggests I've achieved,

                        Something that someone thought vital,

                        That they told to someone else,

                        Till it became fashionably true.

                        In concern, I reach to make it real,

                        But find that the fashion is unrelenting,

                        Its found its own truth of representation,

                        Swears today its the only one that was.

                        I smile, amused at life's whimsical tunes,

                        That buries its attempts at the half-truth,

                        Under even greater falsehood, and is reposed,

                        To defend itself from injuries supposed,

                        That would cause it grief, if exposed.

                        Out, out, thou rehearsed defenders of fake,

                        Let the light in to discover what I never knew. 

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Wow, amazing...I was so lost in your words...the mastery of your flow...its funny, how we think we know something, and it changes at a moments notice, to relearn and readjust...to simply move on. Lovely write.

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
I have sat thinking about the muse, oh how powerful and full of truth it is. I hope like you to be able to let the light in, to discover what I never knew. I once was told that every step of the journey is the journey. To be able to enjoy the path of life and step softly into the light is a wonderful thing. May you be able to walk with straight eyes and find much happiness.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[patricia]

thats why i love gandi...his whole world revolved around seeking truth, its them blinking johari windows that get in the way. loved this sri. bye for now.

[MOON]

Living our truth hard to do in a world that loves conformity.

[DiMar4u]

i really dig how you approached the whimsical and unreliable nature of truth through acceptance. "till it became fashionably true" brilliant landing. thanks for sharing--

[Tate Morgan]

Chasing the dreams of society always leaves us wanting doesnt it Better to walk the road you choose that the one others fear and dream of

[Muse]

Your words are fruitful and full of self-discovery. :)