Shattered Dreams

Hurting

Broken trust

shattered dreams

scattered like dust

devoid it seems.

Heart is breaking

no bandaid will do

hands are shaking

trouble breathing too.

Don't understand 

all of this mess

was it too great a demand

I can't fathom a guess.

Left lost and lonely

dazed and confused

you were my one and only

now I feel so used.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

Why do so many PLAY others when there are so many better things to do, kissing and cuddling trumps fighting and schememing every day of the week, so if he is hurting you so cut him loose and look else where he is not deserving of such romantic poetry and such a heart. keep your chin up sis and keep em' coming

[Princess LouLou]

This a lovely poem. I could relate to that! Keep writing.

[Becky C Strukamp]

This poem speaks loudly of such a powerful truth. Loved it. You penned it beautifully!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the poem, the feelings are so well captured:)

[Ysabel Reyes]

well done! i love the title!

[Linear]

Do all broken hearts mend? Or perhaps just drift along in the sands of remorseless time.
Enjoyed :0)

[frozensakura]

i liked it ^-^
very relatable

[J Todd Underhill]

i loved the rhyme set up on this one. Good quick read, as always I linke your work and the more I read the more I like!

[Helpless]

trust and dreams sure do go hand in hand sometimes.... its sad that so many of us have our dreams crushed over and over. i'm sorry if you went through this. :(
very well thought out writing though.

[Madame]

aww sis, im so sorry your feeling so alone
on the other hand this is very well written.