Elusive Promises

broken dreams

Reviews

[J Todd Underhill]

This reminded me of Jimi Hendrix's Little Wing in a way, some of the word choices reminded me of it. I heard the song live by Brett Marlar last Thursday and it was amazing. I am also partial to Concrete Blondes Version as well. great write and way to capture a poetic fantsy like that.

[BrynnaW.]

For some reason my review didn''t go through... I love this poem! :) and this time you switched it up away from romance. This poem really made me look deeper. I loved it! Good job and keep on writing!

[Inyourshadow]

Loved it sounds like your muse Vixen made an appearence after all lol. Make the next stronger VENT the pain in poetic verse sis and make me scream Hell Yea.

Pixie dust
building sky castles
for daydreaming princesses
that just disappear.

Perfectiion, keep em' coming

[Madame]

i just love the way this sounds sis!!!

[Maya Storm]

This line is so beautiful:
"Magic wands creating
glass slippers that don't last"

This poem is really wonderful, it made my heart light... loving it... A magical piece*****

[Becky C Strukamp]

Terrific Poem. Makes one feel elusive!! Well penned!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Great poem, love the use of words. Wonderful:)

[Linear]

Ah I so used to dream of castles in the sky,of à princess waiting , but alas all turned to dust:......excellent poetry :0)