The Journey

THE JOURNEY

A journey into endless agony
feeding off of meager mortality
peppered with unsubstantiated rivalry
spotted with unrealized generosity
the path taken, though, was clear
the souls saved, so very dear
crucified for a horrible injustice
confusion reigning over justice
a humanitarian throughout the years
they all laid blame on ungodly fears
diminishing worth in a world of hypocrisy

left to rot when only in search of equality

Reviews

[J. Alfred Prufrock]

i enjoyed this also. as read aout loud my cat came to see what all the comotion was about and thoroughly examined the screen.

[MoriartyMesa]

To paint the picture set in my mind, this makes me think of a young Irishman on a boat headed for the land of liberty. Leaving the rocky roads to Dublin, the people, the music, the land of his birth.

For something better, looking on the sea, all the young man of Keeran, looks at a small bible, pack from 'Ma' and a hope for a new world.


Always visual, always charming, and always bringing this reader to a new place.

[0AudreyClaire0]

Wow, that was fantastic. Your amazing at poetry.
-Aud

[luvingu01]

the journey
seem to summon up life

[Lipstick_Lesbian]

Just gorgeous. Beautiful imagery and great rhythm.

[Angelic Surrender]

I can relate. Nice work.

[Emrick]

Nice flow.n i love the message.

[Distant horizons]

Excellent. Love the flow and you're wonderful use of language.