Hazel Eyes

Hazel Eyes

Hazel eyes
dancing in the
fire of moonlit warmth
a coquettish grin playing on her
soft pink lips
swaying her hips to the
beat of his
passion driven heart
circling him with an
intense hunger
Hazel Eyes
holding captive
his stare
bright eyes shining
magnetic
bringing forth light
to the darkest
depths of his soul
swinging to the rhythm
of his fingertips
tracing her curves
with a smile
Hazel Eyes
enchanting
lost in soft kisses
cascading
in multilateral elixirs
of decadent
lust

Reviews

[R.A. Youngblood]

This is very passionate and emotional, erotica. I like your flow of thoughts, playing with words and your imagery. I specially like this:
"fire of moonlit warmth
a coquettish grin playing on her
soft pink lips
swaying her hips to the
beat of his"
Thanks for sharing...Keep it up :D

[Dream Weaver]

Intense vision through alluring hazel eyes!
Beautifully written!

[Southern Cross]

You write with such expression, such rhythm ..I always feel the passion jump off your page and become alive with each line. Soft kisses and intense lust..Is there anything better?

[D. L. Vaccaro]

Even the words seem to dance and sway back and forth as you paint the image of two eye-locked lovers so... perfectly. Amazing job

[Distant horizons]

Love it. Only you could come up with this ending. Multilateral elixirs of decadent lust. Brilliant.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

lovely Deandra :)

[Shane Blackheart]

I love the way you chose to write this, the form, I mean. It read very smoothly. I also love your wording and descriptions. I really liked this, great job!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Very nice! Gotta love those Hazel Eyes... Irresistible! Well done.

[Pax]

a very passionate emotion towards lust. Wonderful write my friend.

[Blindfolded]

Very seductive, very passionate, and very good. I love the way you accentuate the hazel eyes, makes it even more erotic without saying a sinful word.