Stay...

Stay.
Stay, and never leave me.
Me.
Me and you, forever.

Forever.
Forever starts tonight.
Tonight.
Tonight began the life we'll share.

Put your bags down.
Come sit by me, in front of the fire.
Warm yourself.
I can't stand seeing you so upset.
Come, sit.

Abandon all thought of the outside world.
Here, it's only you and me.
Can't we keep it that way...
Keep it that way forever?

Let's start with tonight.
Begin a new life.
I love you...
Please stay with me forever, starting tonight.

Reviews

[Rae]

@Alana McGuire
Thank you. I find it's easiest if you don't go on for tens of thousands of years.(:

[Alana McGuire]

Lovely repetition! And it's very relatable to me. I love how easily, yet beautifully, you have gotten your feelings across.

[Rae]

@Mary Chalmer
Thank you very much.(:

[Mary C]

Well written

[Rae]

Thanks.(:

[etxcp]

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! awesome job!!!!!!!!! write more!