Treasure and Tragedy

Kind of a rough draft

Love can save

Love can kill

Sometimes we wish it away

Othertimes we strive just to feel

Love can be bitter

Love can be sweet

Love is best felt

When two soulmates meet

But what if one soul, Loves the other back not?

Well to be loved is our treasure

To love is our tragedy.

Author's Note

I know it's a bit rough and the end is a bit choppy but I'm still working on it

In the meantime any and all opinions are welcome :)

Reviews

[Nene]

Two sides of love explained beutifully.... This poem simple ... As they say simplicity is the ultimate sofistitation (it may not be like that.... But you get the point right ;)) Im no expert but this I know that Love has many side effects.... Its like a medicine.. If you don't take it you remain sick.... But if you do.. You have to face its side effects.... True love has good side effects while a love unreturned is like taking an antibiotic that doesn't work.... Hahahahahhaahha I guess that's enough pharmacology lesson for one post....

[Death's Poet]

thank you so much!! :) Very true, without love we die, with love we just die a bit slower

[PonoEllis]

I agree with nene

[Harpreet kaur bajwara]

yaar you r outstanding . you use all words very nicely

[my.lost.valentines_]

very well done. for me love is a joke lol

[alf]

Hi Shadow Poet. I am glad you will continue to work on this piece. I felt a sense of frustration reading this, as if you were struggling to say something that just wouldn't flow from your pen on that day. I like where you are heading, and truly hope you will make it, then I believe, this will be a wonderful poem, alf

[Emily]

Nice wording!!
Well done!

[Death's Poet]

Thank you so much!