Broken

This is a Refrain I made for English class and for someone I hold dear to me...enjoy

Broken

Every Night you cringe in fear

Holding onto your life so dear

Broken

Your cuts and bruises grow deeper in your skin

Making your sanity grow more thin

Broken

Every night you cry yourself to sleep

As the cuts on your body grow more deep

Broken

Destroyed, disturbed, unspoken

How else could you become more broken?

Broken

Thoughts of death gush into your mind

Thinking of those you’d leave behind

Broken

You take the knife against your chest

And plunge it deep, as you’re put to rest

Broken

As you leave your life behind

There’s something else you should keep in mind

Broken

This might be something you never knew,

But there is someone who’ll miss you

Broken

Your life, your bones, your cuts left open

Torn at your soul as you are left…

Broken

 

 

Reviews

[Undying Glory]

wow i really like this, the refrain's great, even though it's only one word because that one word "Broken" really has a lot of impact. awesome

[Chelsea.]

This was way better than any of my pieces. I'm not sure what exactly it is, but there is something about it that i like. How you write? i'm not sure. Very relatable[word?] actually,. I like this one a lot.