*PENDING*

Coming of age and judgement.

You want to know where you stand,

Where your spaceship will land,

What problems you will have in hand.

But you're confused.

~Who isn't?~

Thinking of who you want to be,

What you want to see,

What's the real meaning of me?

But you don't want to be wrong.

~I never liked being wrong.~

Will Stigmas and labels fade? 

Fall behind the darkness of shade.

Will it take over you in a raid,

Will someone stop to give you aid?

~I really hope someone would.~

Or will it stand strong as a wood table

Will you, yourself be stable

Will you fall?

Or shall you for eternity brightly stand tall.

~Me? I'm not sure~

Author's Note

I was inspired by the book "I Hunt Killers" I'm not sure where I was going with this.. But I love getting feedback. Also any suggestions of names?

Reviews

[SonOfPlunder]

I've heard that book is good, this has inspired me to check it out. Good piece, solid work

[Saddam]

Will you, yourself be stable
Will you fall?
Or shall you for eternity brightly stand tall.
This is very inspiriting piece of art. very nice poem.
It is very sad, and your a truly very brave girl though you have big issue. God bless dear.

[mikeb9183]

It's pretty good. I don't think it's great but it's solid. I'll score it a 70/100.