Followers of Fleeting, Fancy Footwork

Followers of Fleeting, Fancy Footwork

A Poem by Deena Miller

The knower of Fleeting and Fancy
Rests inside us all
The indecisiveness and candor
Will surely make us fall...

Who, says you,
Is the bringer of all that's green?
Like a lover torn between two loves
I am all but in between.

© 2008 Deena Miller


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Reminds me of spring stuck between. Great little piece you got here.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice rhythm .. and nice form ... i like it and your pretty fancy and fleeting with your tounge

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on March 7, 2008

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Deena Miller
Deena Miller

Minneapolis, MN



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So who am I? I'm.... ...obsessed with Hello Kitty. I even have a tattoo of her :) (be nice and maybe I'll show you where *wink*) ...creative. I love to make things...I dabble in loads of thin.. more..