Life Can Close Just like a Door

Life can close just like a door,
Hiding memories
not seen anymore.
Open the door,
Breathe in, breathe out,
That's what life should be about.
Taking time to smell the flowers;
With no clock,
no watch,
To count the hours
Of days past,
Of mornings gone
Of nights that left
Bright lights on.

Reviews

Your writing in poetry style was beautiful... The words you chose to blend together, joined in becoming one piece of writing which moved my heart, awoke my emotions and made me aware of how blessed I am in my life. The reading of this was smooth and even balanced throughout. Your rhyming was well done and the format was fitting.
I enjoyed this writing and applaud your abilities..

Nisa