Homeless

this poor man

You see a dirty, poor man begging for change on the dark, cold ground, some people whispering to their children to stay away from someone like him. Some people have enough purity and holiness to look at him for more than three seconds, but as you look at the man you see a dirtied face, with tear stains on his jacket and dried blood on his face, you begin to walk away, and you know you will never get his face out of your head.

Reviews

[apocalypse]

4th line ..there's a typo..mare should be more
Good write otherwise.

[mystic soul]

well written piece... i felt as if i was there looking ta that poor man..... wonderful!!!!!!!

[Luna]

That is very intense and sad. It is well written. Good Job

[The Lone Wolf Prose]

Wow... chilling. I now have an imprint of this phantom man in my mind. Very real. Good write.