Open your eyes

Can you just relize,

Just open your eyes,

Not what on the outside,

But whats on the inside,

But I guess you cant,

Time is up for you,

There is nothing else you can do.

Reviews

[Sashalee]

I like this poem, wish you would made it a bit longer :)

[Lynn]

Good job jen!!! You should write poems more often. and keep up with those stories

[Crow]

I like this profounf piece, I often wonder how many people finally if ever get to see who they really are inside.

[Canicus]

I like it, hope yet disappointment, I think you did a very good job of mixing those two emotions. Good write, keep it up.