Im glad

Im glad we stopped,

The fight we just demolished,

Im glad that we can be friends,

I can tell you still love me,

Im glad that me and your sister have gotten along,

I still remember all the fights we had,

Im glad I still have you as a friend,

I know you want as more than a friend,

Im glad that I love you,

and you love me back but it just wont work.

Reviews

[emma]

huh. sad, but also not. it was well written, and flowed easily...up until the last sentence. i think you should break it up into two sentences. it would sound less out of place. if you don't think so, try saying it out loud and see if that changes your perspective. if not, its your poem, and you do what you want with it. just a suggestion. again, i liked it. good job.

[Wandering Violet]

Kind of bittersweet.

[stars are far]

this is so sad . I hope you feel better *__*
great work :)

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i like it and i thought it was all happy then we got to the sad part... but still it was awesome ... also i kinda agree with Emmaclaire on fixing the last stanza but again it is your poem and i still think it is awesome

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

It's like "I love you good-bye" .. Boys hate just being friends .. It somehow makes them less ..

Way Tender .. Young one ... Jazz

[Canicus]

This is a really good expression of feeling. confusion, love, and relief.
nice