The Longest Wait

A short poem.

My heart beats out loud, it is here;
No longer am I, content to live in fear.

Eyes filled with joy, holding a single tear;
Waiting for whom, that I hold dear.

My breath, now no longer timid;
Awaits for a time, where we can be vivid.

Time is my prison, yet you are my muse;
All will come together, after my long wait for you.

Author's Note

It's my first poem. I'm not sure if I'm going to work a lot with poems, but if I get inspiration from somewhere, I might write a few now and again.

Reviews

[Wordless Wanderer]

The thing I liked the most in the poem is the rhyming scheme. Also the fact that such few lines explain so much.

[EquivalentExchange]

It's short but it doesn't feel it, I love that you used grammar and it always makes me happy to see writers who are taking care to spell things properly and use the right words. I will be looking forward to future pieces!

[Jenni-Chan]

i like it. it's very good. if you like to write poems that rhyme, then write more. if you like poems that don't and you have inspiration, then do that. that's all i can say. i loved it.