Bliss

A time of great peace within oneself it's almost like a bissful oblivion.

I lay beneath the sun.

Such a brilliant white light... It blinds me.

My eyes closed, I dream of the end.

So peaceful, painless.

Is this what dying feels like?

Such serenity, It fills me with peace.

All my desires, painfull emotions, and temptations gone...

Lost within that blinding light.

Tranquillity radiates through my soul.

It's so blissful.

So much that I find myself slipping...

Into Oblivion.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[EternityWolf101]

I sorta know what dying feels like since its happened to me a few times. It is a strange place, I will tell you that. Very thought provoking poem there, Demitri.

[Brittany]

I do hope that that is what dying feels like. :) Beautiful words. Good job.