pride of summer swept

pride of summer swept

A Poem by Dennis
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pride of summer swept
into smoky pyre fire pile
funeral of friend

 

 

© 2011 Dennis


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Wonderful write.
Enjoyed reading.

Posted 12 Years Ago


A good write and skillfully crafted traditional haiku. Perfect form. Good imagery. I like the contrast you paint with your words that is vivid and powerful. Good aha moment in line three. Good alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can relate to this. It's sad to see autumn go. Nice haiku Dennis.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Dennis
Dennis

Carleton, MI



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I've been a poet for 13 years, I live in the state of Michigan, USA more..