pride of summer swept

 

 

pride of summer swept
into smoky pyre fire pile
funeral of friend

 

 

Reviews

[zainul]

Wonderful write.
Enjoyed reading.

[ShelleyA]

A good write and skillfully crafted traditional haiku. Perfect form. Good imagery. I like the contrast you paint with your words that is vivid and powerful. Good aha moment in line three. Good alliteration and assonance. Well penned. Write on!

[Raven]

I can relate to this. It's sad to see autumn go. Nice haiku Dennis.