flowerful

its all ab its just flowerful with nice rhythm and flow.

In unison-uniformity yay!
On pergola peonies are portrayed:
low beloa andd high above,
sprig matures and foiliage uncoil.

Say behold my rose shall be hold;
sniffle my friend new aura unfolds.
Hyacinth pearls, rosemary petals;
colorful stands, lovely fragrance.

In dawn gloom blue is riddled,
from overcast sky blue rays shoots;
this is due to loose-cloud ripples,
to put a shine on the new spring bloom.

Author's Note

i think this is my best as far as poetry rhythm and flow is concerned.

Reviews

[A]

This is a really good poem, I loved the theme, you presented it very neatly, great job

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful write that brings earth alive in a floral display of grace. My favorite line is "Hyacinth pearls, rosemary petals; colorful stands, lovely fragrance.." With the colors and scents blending, this just lifts the heart!