like play

if you love someone, you'll think about them a lot.

A world without you is null,
so says my heart filled with your thoughts,
and when everyone overly sought,
some packages to get some fun.
But alone in bed lull me,
with no humming birds or lillies,
only your thoughts got me smiling.
Like play, like play,
you are driving me crazy.

in an envelope of extreme phantom,
exist accolades of your beauty in my mind,
and tenderly as your thoughts booms alive,
in the very depth of my heart,
alone in bed lull me,
with no humming birds or lillies,
only your thoughts got me smiling.
Like play, like play,
you are driving me crazy.

you amuse me and hence arouse the muse,
that exist in my mind in pure dormancy,
you got me inscribing and spilling inks,
emotional outpour on my spread sheet.
alone in bed lull me,
with no humming birds or lillies,
only your thoughts got me smiling.
Like play, like play,
you are driving me crazy.

Author's Note

was just really concerned about the flow. Tell me what you think about it.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

You celebrate so freely the impression just one person can have to influence the mind and heart... to move us to action or despair. So well said, my friend!

[Ruth]

I think the flow is perfection! I really do, the choice of words allows the reader to dwell over the poem slowly and comfortably :) Words are meant to be used for maximum effect and you did so here xoxo

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

I thought the flow was nice. Anyone who has ever been infatuated can relate to this poem. Creative and thoughtful writing.