Love At First Maybe

Love At First Maybe

A Poem by Desert Knave
"

(My Baby)

"
As soon as 
She said "Maybe"
I thought "Oh, baby !"
As I was so sure
She would say "No"
I was already
Preparing to go
So as soon as
She said "Maybe"
She was my Baby


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave


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Cute poem this one is. This is light hearted and written cleverly. thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol.
Love? I don't know.
"Maybe."
It could be, "maybe, just maybe."

Crazier things, have happened.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jim,
We are so easy...
Vol

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

11 Months Ago

LOL. Yes, most of us are. ~Jim

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Added on January 27, 2025
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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..