You Picked the Locks

You picked the locks

Or you found the keys

Whatever you did

You got to me

What I'd locked away

You got to see

You picked the locks

Or you found the keys

You got past my

Insecurity

You opened the locks

And got to me

You picked the locks

Or you were the key

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2023

Author's Note

Wrote this 2 years ago and never shared it.

Reviews

[Michael Sun Bear]

Most of us write about love, or at least romance. I am happy when I find this human condition expressed in a way I haven’t seen before, which you have done for me here. Great last line. I enjoyed this a lot.

[Desert Knave]

Thank you so much. The last line was what made the poem sit so long, till I found the way to make it work. ~Jim

[A.H.]

Nice word play here. Lock and Keys. enjoyed reading it.

[Desert Knave]

Thank you !!