It Let Go Too

It Let Go Too

A Poem by Desert Knave
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An entendre or deux

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Somewhere in
The afterglow
Of letting go
His parachute
Let go too
After that
It was splat
He was through


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave


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He landed with a thud. A sad ending which made naughty me smile. I hope this wasn’t about you Jim.

Enjoyed the brevity.

Chris

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

10 Months Ago

Thanks ! No, I always was careful with my parachutes. ~Jim

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..