When I Turn (This Time)

Within the Word and the Way

I've never really

Stopped looking for you

In the course of my days

I know we'll meet again

Within the word

And within the way

Maybe this time

When I turn I will stay

Within the word

And within the way

For the rest of my days

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

I love that line, "within the word and within the way".....very effective. Sometimes we miss the chance to be with someone...someone incomparable. We don't always realize the worth of people, do we? Lots of regret here, Jim. I hope you get a second chance. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

Thanks so much. Yes, I hope for a second chance as well. ~Jim

[Michael Sun Bear]

You have written a lovely poem of both regret and hope. I agree with Lydia; within the word and within the way are great lines. Nice work!

[Desert Knave]

Thanks so much !!! ~Jim

[Dylan Macadham]

Ah, yes, I get this all too well!
The What if's & Shoulda's sure pile up, don't they!
...by the way, your 2-repeating lines are worthy of the Greats!

[Desert Knave]

Thanks so much. Woulda's and shoulda's do make for poetic fuel for sure. ~Jim

[Dylan Macadham]

they do! :)

[MCS]

Great piece of writing. I enjoyed the twists and turns with their cryptic undertones.

[Desert Knave]

Thank you.