Little Makes Me (More Forlorn)

A Poem by Desert Knave

a distich couplet

Little makes me more forlorn

Than being told how I should mourn

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave

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redd Brick Keshner

Here, here Jim… you can mourn in any colour of choice as long as it’s a shade of sable or ebony🕊🙏🏻

Posted 10 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Months Ago

Thanks !! I do like those shades. ~Jim

10 Months Ago

Nice! A fluke of a lucky guess on my part it seems 🙏🏻🕊️

Lydia Shutter

Great couplet....no one can tell you how to mourn. There is no time table and there is no "right" way. Lydi**

Posted 10 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Months Ago

Thank you so much. Yeah, the time and way to mourn are very individual. ~Jim

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Added on March 10, 2025
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Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ

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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..