A Most Common Vow

a distich couplet dedicated to "She"

Yesterday my "Hello !" was quite politely returned

Now she's my common-law bride as far as I'm concerned

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025 

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

The way you phrase this little couplet does seem like love at first sight....it doesn't take much to attract these days...nicely crafted...
Warmly, B

[Desert Knave]

Thank you so much !! ~Jim

[Betty Hermelee]

Always a pleasure Jim🌷
Warmly, B

[Lydia Shutter]

LOL There are some men...and some women...who take a smile and an hello and make it into a torrid love affair. You have a knack for saying a lot in just a couple lines, Jim. I liked this. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

Thanks. Yeah, I had a little fun with this one. ~Jim

[redd Brick Keshner]

Brings to mind that famous line: “you had me at hello.” 🙏🏻🕊

[Desert Knave]

Yes, indeed. Thanks !!

[redd Brick Keshner]

Very welcome, Jim🙏🏻🕊️
Freds.