More Sins Than My Sloth

More Sins Than My Sloth

A Poem by Desert Knave
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a tristich triplet

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I'll still be drawn to you like a moth
Long after you have pledged your troth
I guess I have more sins than my sloth


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave


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I have learn. Don't count the old sin. Could become very heavy. Nice logic in your words. I liked the ending a lot. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

7 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind comment !!
Those sloths! Sinners all! Don’t even get me started on moths!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

8 Months Ago

LOL. Thanks. ~Jim
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

You are welcome.

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..