More Sins Than My Sloth

More Sins Than My Sloth

A Poem by Desert Knave
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a tristich triplet

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I'll still be drawn to you like a moth
Long after you have pledged your troth
I guess I have more sins than my sloth


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave


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I have learn. Don't count the old sin. Could become very heavy. Nice logic in your words. I liked the ending a lot. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind comment !!
Those sloths! Sinners all! Don’t even get me started on moths!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

11 Months Ago

LOL. Thanks. ~Jim
Coyote Poetry

10 Months Ago

You are welcome.

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..