Heavier When Wait is Applied

Heavier When Wait is Applied

A Poem by Desert Knave
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a distich couplet

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The weight becomes heavier when "Wait !" is applied
By someone who's only along for the ride


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025 

© 2025 Desert Knave


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MCS
You're so right, nothing worse than dead weight.

Posted 6 Months Ago


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Desert Knave

6 Months Ago

Thanks so much ! ~Jim

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..