Would Have Chosen You (Before Choosing Me)

I think that I would

Have chosen you

Before choosing me

Could I have chosen

The me I would be

For my heart knows true

If I could be you

Then I'd finally

Truly love me...

And how cool would that be 

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

Loving yourself must come first....before you can truly love someone else. However, having said that, I must say this is so romantic. We are someone else with every person we have a relationship with...I believe that. Always enjoy reading you, Jim. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

Thank you so much. Truthfully, I did learn to at least believe I was worthy of love through her. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Then I am happy you met her!

[John the Baptist]

A breakup of that kind of relationship would truly be confusing.

[Desert Knave]

LOL. It could be indeed. Thank you. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Oh yes. how cool would that be...for sure.

[Desert Knave]

Thank you !