Morning (Mourning) Aura

Morning (Mourning) Aura

A Poem by Desert Knave
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a quatern about a migraine's visual aura

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Where before was perfect sight
Is now a blinding, pulsing light
There's a migraine on the way
What a way to start the day

A glowing blur of a rainbow bright
Where before was perfect sight
At least I'm not behind the wheel
And I've got meds to help me deal

I'm darkening the whole house now
It always helps a bit somehow
Where before was perfect sight
The aura tells me of a blight

So, for now, I'll muddle through
There's not much more that I can do
I've a blinding, pulsing light
Where before was perfect sight

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2023

© 2025 Desert Knave


Author's Note

Desert Knave
My take on a migraine I had, in a favorite fixed form, the quatern

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I like the repetition in this piece...also I have several family members who suffer from migraines...it takes a lot out of you, and leaves you exhausted....they say a dark room is good therapy.... your writing is vivid and really shows us the pain and suffering.... NICE!
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much. Migraines have been a regular part of my life as far back as I can recall. ~Jim
Betty Hermelee

2 Months Ago

You are most welcome!
Warmly, B



Reviews

I like the repetition in this piece...also I have several family members who suffer from migraines...it takes a lot out of you, and leaves you exhausted....they say a dark room is good therapy.... your writing is vivid and really shows us the pain and suffering.... NICE!
Warmly, B

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much. Migraines have been a regular part of my life as far back as I can recall. ~Jim
Betty Hermelee

2 Months Ago

You are most welcome!
Warmly, B

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..