Got Your Nose With My Heart

Got Your Nose With My Heart

A Poem by Desert Knave
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She had me right from the start
When she played "Got your nose !" with my heart


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave


Author's Note

Desert Knave
A little silliness for an old friend

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lol. Fantastic. Great work.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

2 Months Ago

Thanks so much ! ~Jim
Nothing like little kids...so honest, so playful, much smarter in their games than we give them credit for being.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

2 Months Ago

Thanks. Yeah, kids are more emotionally smart than most adults. ~Jim
I love it. You must be around children some of the time. I assume “she” is an adult, you were successfully clever using “Got your nose” in describing how she seized your heart!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

2 Months Ago

Thanks. Yeah, been around a few kids and this particular adult just got me. ~Jim

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Added on October 28, 2025
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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..