A Perfect Fourteen (A Queen)

A Perfect Fourteen (A Queen)

A Poem by Desert Knave
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a poem to a Rubenesque vision

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She was much more than just
Another perfect ten
She was also, you see
A quite perfect fourteen
So perfectly not lean
At just shy of five-three
She was perfect, to me
She was truly a queen


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave


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I love how this celebrates a figure with warmth and affection, finding perfection in her presence and form. The poem has a playful reverence that’s grounded in genuine admiration. It feels like a quiet crown laid on her essence.
..Roma

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

2 Months Ago

Thank you. Yeah, it was fun to write, but she really was perfection.

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..