Perfection Walking Away

Perfection Walking Away

A Poem by Desert Knave
"

a sonnet about a sway

"
I'd follow
Behind you
Till my
Dying day
Because you're
Perfection
When you're
Walking
Away
And your hips
Always have
So much
To say
With their sway


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave


Author's Note

Desert Knave
a tribute to a dog-walker in my neighborhood

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This poem is beautifully crafted simple, rhythmic, and full of emotion. I love how the imagery captures movement and admiration in such a graceful way. Truly captivating work

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

emmajohn

4 Months Ago

I ask you something is that are you any thought about the newyear
Desert Knave

4 Months Ago

The new year kind of scares me, but, I am ready.
emmajohn

4 Months Ago

Oh are you active on any other social? so we discuss there further

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..