Thinking Itself (Thoughtless)

Thinking Itself (Thoughtless)

A Poem by Desert Knave
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a distich couplet

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It's thinking itself that seems to be
The most thoughtless thing I can do to me


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave


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A nicely penned piece of Zen-like wisdom. I very recently heard a Sufi discourse describing how we are not our thoughts and emotions, and that a beginning step on that Path is to try to step back and as our True Self try to be an observer, not a participant in that activity of the mind. Your two lines strongly reminded me of that.

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Desert Knave

1 Month Ago

Thank you. I just wish I could have gotten some of this in my head when I was a bit younger. ~Jim



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I thought about it and think I agree with you.

Cheers, Jim.

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Desert Knave

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much ! ~Jim
I pondered on this Jim. I can at times over think. Yes, I am guilty of this. And certainly it is a thoughtless thing to do to yourself. Too much thinking can be a pain in the backside.

Chris

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Desert Knave

1 Month Ago

Thank you ! Yes, it's really easy to ruin something by overthinking it. ~Jim
A nicely penned piece of Zen-like wisdom. I very recently heard a Sufi discourse describing how we are not our thoughts and emotions, and that a beginning step on that Path is to try to step back and as our True Self try to be an observer, not a participant in that activity of the mind. Your two lines strongly reminded me of that.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

1 Month Ago

Thank you. I just wish I could have gotten some of this in my head when I was a bit younger. ~Jim
If we think too much, we hesitate...and he or she who hesitates is lost.
j.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

1 Month Ago

Thank you. Yeah, thinking can really take the joy out of a lot of things. ~Jim

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..