What Else Would Someone So Smitten Do

What Else Would Someone So Smitten Do

A Poem by Desert Knave
"

a slender sonnet

"
Of
course
I've
often
thought
about
you !
What
else
would
someone
so
smitten
do ?


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2026

© 2026 Desert Knave


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This says devotion in a stuttered whisper.
The spacing lets longing do all the talking.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

2 Months Ago

Thank you. As brief as this one was it took me a bit to find its right structure. ~Jim

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Added on January 26, 2026
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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..