A Dangerous Passion It Seems

a distich couplet (pardon my non-French)

My passion for you is quite dangerous it seems

As it causes many little deaths in my dreams

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2026

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Oh wow....I have experienced this in a different way, a few times.
It caused emotional deaths for others...and resuscitation was really hard.

[Desert Knave]

Thanks LOL.

[Curly Grace]

A sharp little spark of a couplet... danger wrapped in rhyme.
Amazing how two lines can carry so much heat.

[Desert Knave]

Thank you. It was a fun write. ~Jim

[Rosie C]

This is very deep, very absorbing.

A lot to take in but I’m totally amused and fascinated.

Well and truly a pleasure to read.

[Desert Knave]

Thanks so much. ~Jim

[Soren]

Short but says so much. A statement of power, power we give to others and our desires. A lovely write

[Desert Knave]

Thank you !! ~Jim

[Soren]

You are welcome