Your Satellite

a skinny sonnet about "science"

It

has

become

abundantly

clear

that

your

gravity

is

all

that's

keeping

me

here

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2026

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Superb work. Excellent form.

[Desert Knave]

Thanks you !

[FlatDaddy]

I'm
glad
it
wasn't
longer
but
it's
quite
funny.
Then I noticed I got no points for this review! Sheesh! Ah, wait, there's one! Hooray!
FlatDaddy

[Desert Knave]

Thanks so much. ~Jim

[FlatDaddy]

Sorry, Jim. I think I took too many of my pain pills today and you have suffered for it. I really have enjoyed your work. I'll try to read more when I'm sober. (actually, I'm fine (though I do take those pills; I just felt like I might have seemed too flippant over something well written). FD

[Michael Sun Bear]

Skinny but teasing. Is this really about science or a relationship? Or?

[Desert Knave]

LOL. Thanks for the comment. Yeah, it is about a relationship for sure. ~Jim