In The Shadows

A shaky breath, white on the cold night air;
From parted lips, crimson red and trembling, panting so fair.
Her chest rising and falling from this great force;
Her legs gone numb and shaky, but strong through her passion.
Her eyes flutter shut in a most becoming fashion.
A cool breeze most welcome against her glistening skin,
This feeling so good, though must be sin.
But she looks so enchanting, how could he stop?
Watching her run each night, silently suffering as he waits to aproach her and let his gaurd drop.

Alyssa Gandolfi

Reviews

[Flow~]

I love how you added environment into this it adds to the sensuality of it. Each lines drips with wanting passions that seem to grow as I read on. How can something that feels so good be a sin? I also wonder why chocolate has to have calories. You write is wonderful and I enjoyed the read!

[An owl on the moon]

Has the deep quality of a dream, dark and bittersweet... Your words flow here with such a misty beauty... Amazing write.