Let Me Be Your Wings

Let me be your wings,

Everyday I’ll take you higher, till your heart sings.

Let me be your dearest,

Against Romeo and Juliet, our love shall prove severest.

Let me be your sun,

I’ll keep you from darkness, unto every shadow my rays shall run.

Let me be your dreams,

And each night we’ll lay by fairy streams.

Let me be your desires,

Unquenchable shall be the beacons of our passion’s fires.

Away from this world and unto a one of undiscovered things,

We’ll dance among the stars and upon Saturn’s rings,

The keeper of my heart, in your hands I’ll lay my strings,

If you’ll only let me be your wings.

Alyssa Gandolfi

Reviews

[Done]

"Away from this world and unto a one of undiscovered things,
We'll dance among the stars and upon Saturn's rings," -- My favorite line in the poem. It's those fantastic images which I love to read in poems and stories. It paints such a magical picture, surreal, the perfect place for love to flourish.

Thanks for the poem.

[Colby]

Wow girl everything that I've read from you has been completely amazing! I love your style.
I had the hardest time trying to decide which of your works I wanted to review because I love all of them.
I think of what I've read though this is my favorite one.
"Let me be your desires. Unquenchable shall be the beacons of our passion's fires."
BEAUTIFUL!!!

I'm looking forward to reading more from you!!!
Keep it up!
-Colby

[John Sanders]

This was lovely. Now if only a girl would write something like this for *me*(!)