The River

A River of blood ! :)

The blood that flows our body's like a river 

A River filled with screams and cry's 

They cry for help and you stand their watching their dead body's in the River of Blood

When I wake all I hear are screams from the River of Blood

The screams and cry's get loud but I don't hear anything

The blood and screams don't matter to me

They say I'm weird so I will never help them 

get out of the River of Blood

Author's Note

I hope your having a great day and if your not I hope this makes you happy. Happy reading ! :)

Reviews

[T.S. Ulmus]

I saw you review one of my friends and your pen name drew me to your page. This is the first of your poems I have read, now I certainly intend to read more. Imagery and creativity, the willingness to go where others won't, this poem speaks of a great poet.

Respectfully, as a colleague, I believe in line three you mean to use "there".

[Anxiety]

Yes thank you for reading and I can't wait for you to read more of my work. Yes I meant "there" auto-correct !