Hold it all In

I'm trying to break through,

Slip my fingers into your grooves

So we can dance,

Like no one ever has before

 

With our fingers laced,

like hour glasses

And your eyes become dark,

and then pale

As I continuosly exhale

 

These eminating fumes,

Desperation

pouring out of my veins,

And you always try not to say

that I just may be insane

 

As the smoke rolls

around your face,

Embracing

Like a cascade of broken dreams,

I feel like I'm ripping

from the seams,

but you're not going to sew

me back together

 

So the base of my neck

aches and pulses,

In conundrum with my

hearts beating,

And you tell me to just

hold my breath,

hold it all in

 

Until my face is the color of Melancholy.

Reviews

[Norma M Sutton]

Dark and depressing.

[Robin]

you control the flow of emotion so well with your pen . excellent and original finish .