Just Tonight

 

I sit here next to you,

smoking my fresh, green marijuana,

inhaling smugly.

 

You're the picture of perfection, My love.

 

 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Nothing wrong with a little token now and then. It can make you feel the euphoria of love alright.

[Crusaderscross]

You describe quite well what love is, a mixture of reality and dream. Loved it

[al25]

Great last line. :)

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

you manifest the inhale in words concisely beaded for effect~ excellent~

[Sports Girl]

Nice job. Short but still good

[Akshat♥]

yes this a picture of perfection...you like everything in your love...very short & sad poem...very nicely written..thnx for sharing...keep writing:)

[Jonathan De Elvira]

o.O
You smoke marijuana?? WHoa!!!
I want some too though...
Sitting alone half bondage in my room does make me thirst for a few sip of that stuff..:P...
jk...
Anyway, nice short writing..

[Ruth]

A concise hit!
A really good poem love, intoxication has tinted glasses lol
Awesome
xx

[Dream Weaver]

A white owl wrap
smoking to perfection.
indeed a higher form
of love...

[Brittany W]

Short but with such little words you can picture so much, great job.