Midnight Serenades

 

 

 

You'll find her beneath the willow tree
Softly praying on her knees

Under midnight skies she swoons
Crying out to her father Moon

Coyote meets her solemn call
Howling his melancholy song

Fairies meet her in the night
Sighing with her precious sight

They dance beneath the Willow tree
Singing of that far away sea

Where lands of beauty have crystal skies
and their Mother laughs with twinkling eyes

She bows her head and Sings in praise
Remembering that hallow place

The willow sighs with tender leaves
as she prepares to take her leave

Into the night she slowly waits
for her Mother to bind her fate

 

 

 

Author's Note

For the darkness, it does call...

Reviews

[Omar Fendri]

your way of writing reminds me by the lovely Amy lee.
You have the talent. Breathtaking inspiration, specific words create such an outstanding imagination.
i felt sad when i was reading it... You tame the reader's mind (at least for me)
i like your poems :) Keep it up
hope someday to hear one of your poems in a song :) really hope so :)
I cherish "Midnight Serenades" :)

[sushi]

"Under midnight skies she swoons
Crying out to her father Moon"

awesome write...

[Aven]

I will look beneath the willow tree! fantastic write. :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Oh ...makes think of days long gone by...a pagan lass lost in grief...but that is just my interpretation...your words like much needed rain fall on the hearts of your admirers :)

[Bard Constantine]

It does call, and how sweetly does it sing... a captivating night song; I could hear the wolves in the distance join their voices to the chorus...

[Miss Coral]

Beautiful piece- love the imagery. I would either capitalize the first "Willow" or make the second lowercase. Otherwise, very nice piece, as usual. :)

-Coral-

[Havatara]

I loved this. It was smooth and wistful, and it was perfectly balanced. The only part I didn't like was in the third to the last stanza, place just doesn't seem right to me. It goes with what you're trying to say, but it doesn't sound right, but it's great the way it is. Well done.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

melancholy yet magikal notes waft through the mind with your beautiful word painting~

[Ruth]

It certainly does call love! lol
To advance in life, is to know what lurks in that very darkness!
This is wonderful love!
xx

[Lilly]

Enchanting poem - great feel, melody and images

[CLosed]

wow, i loved it, brilliant job.