A Monster

About my Stepmother

A Monster, A Monster.
Why can nobody see she is
A Monster, A Monster.
A Monster did this to me.

Hands grips, they bruised my wrists,
A big red mark, across my heart.
The burns on my neck, from a candle stick
A Monster

A Monster, A Monster,
Why can nobody see she is
A Monster, A Monster
A Monster did this to me.

The tears in my eyes, they think that I lie,
The blood on the floor, from cuts that she made,
A Stake in my heart, from Satan's dart,
A Monster

She is a Monster
Why am I the one in the cage?
When she is the one that caused all the pain?
How can I be the lunatic?
When she is the one to cause this?

A pain in my heart
My eyes to lose sight
A gasp to my final breath
A Monster brought me to my death

A Monster
A Monster

A Monster, A Monster
Why can nobody see she is
A Monster, A Monster.
A Monster killed me.

Author's Note

Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[Shannon Leigh]

I really enjoyed this. The repetitiveness was just enough that it was forceful but not overpowering. There a story told with out having the poem be too long. It also had a good rhythm and flow, as any good poem should.
I'll be sure to check out more of your work
Great job!

[Quentin Moyer]

I love this! Excellent flow to it and I started singing it! Really good job!

[J Todd Underhill]

I think that the presentation makes it hard to read, but the poem itself is worth the read, normally I would just dump out of a poem this hard to read and move on to something else, but it said you were new and figured I would wade my way through it!