A piece of Bliss

Party's great ecstasy, escape from the cruel reality

The rhythms make me sway
Minds and hearts are blown away

Can't escape from its magic

with each beat that's so fantastic

 

With the colourful flickering lights

dancing in the darkness of the night

Turn this place upside down

Everybody's awake in this town

 

Boys with their beers, girls on their high heels
lets party until we fall on our knees
Let you heart be on fire
It's our freedom, our desire

 

On the floor, we're moving on
with this music we're grooving on
This party's great ecstasy
Escape from cruel reality

Little piece of bliss

Author's Note

Please ignore the grammar problems * as always*.............

Reviews

[Me]

nice

[tk]

*party rock is in the house tonight!* ^_^
great rhymes.. i imagine dancing and partying til my body drops. haha!! :)
cool poem!
*A.A.*

[NightShade]

I could use just such a celebration about now! Seriously, great work!

[joshua deathdealer]

The imagery in this write is amazing and I love party poems so this is my favorite piece I've read today. Every line is exciting and an absolute pleasure to read. Awesome work...xx

[Jeremy Baker]

Party on dude!

[....]

This is wonderful, enjoyed the rhythm. So very nice....xo

[Thea]

Party, yeah! :)))

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So rythmical, has a beat that is super, like an anthem :)

[compositionc]

The rhythms make me sway
Minds and hearts are blown away
Can't escape from its magic
with each beat that's so fantastic

With the colourful flickering lights
dancing in the darkness of the night
Turn this place upside down
Everybody's awake in this town

Boys with their beers, girls on their high heels
lets party until we fall on our knees
Let you heart be on fire
It's our freedom, our desire

On the floor, we're moving on
with this music we're grooving on
This party's great ecstasy
Escape from cruel reality

Little piece of bliss
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Sorry. I couldn't read the poem, so I just copied it here. It was epic. The rhyming, the words, the scene you pictured. Really well written.