suicide?

there's a lot of people who thinks suicide is the best solution to their problems

Nothing’s there, I’m all alone

There’s no one I can rely on except my own

I thought I got a lot of friends

But no one stays with me until the end

 

Pressure, mistakes and lies pushed me to the edge

In fear I’m shaking, in sweat I am drenched

I slipped, I tried to stay up

But I lost all my hopes and gave up

 

They just watched me as I fall and shatter

But no one care because it doesn’t matter

Memories of the past turned into my nightmares

I’m always out of place, I don’t belong anywhere

 

Everything that I have is gone

I gave my best to all the things that I’ve done

But they always prove me wrong

I knew I was a failure all along

 

With this blade, It has been decided where all it ends

I don’t want to live like this, I just want to fade away instead

I don’t want to see my cruel fate

I just want to lose all this pain that I hate

 

Red velvet fluid slowly started to drip

From the wrist on which I reaped

Drowned in the water where it flows like rose petals

Blood shines at the tip of metal

 

Author's Note

Please ignore the grammar problems......

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

You have portrayed these feelings of deep depression and thoughts of suicide very very well. Excellent work and of course I'm loving the pic...xx

[A Risen Heroine.]

Wow.... this is so sad and filled with sorrow..
I can definiatly feel the emotions...
I can also relate..
Very well done and thank you for sharing..

~A Fallen Heroine~

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Wow...that's all i can give is an awed "Wow..."

[Jeremy Baker]

Sad and sorrowful

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

You have captured the thoughts and feelings so well, and people do think like that, magificent insight this possesses!!!