I will Remember

I once loved you and I don't regret it ........ ^^,

I remember, we used to watch together the sunset
we always walk on the beach, castle made of sand
we exchange promises, every vows we said
how tight you hold my hands

I remember those sweet whispers “I love you”
how I vanished in your kisses
the weird feeling that tickles
And how much I love you

I remember each fights we made
those misunderstandings and how we became undone
cruel words we throw to each other
Now, our affection to each other is gone

I remember when we said our goodbyes
Each night with endless cries

when you’re not by my side, when we’re apart
it’s hard to deal with the overflowing  pain in my heart

 

I will always remember our love story
I never regret it, don't be sorry

you never missed, you gave me enough

I will always remember that you were my first love.

Author's Note

hehehehehe I dedicate this one to mr. K teeeeeeeheeeeeeeee........... ^^,

Reviews

[K.C. Zbryk]

such a lovely tribute to a love passed. The emotions that we feel early on in a relationship can not be forgotten, but what we learned during the relationship is even more important. It seems like you grew from this and still cherish this memory. All of this makes this piece wonderful

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Very nice! Great job.

[SuicidePact.]

This was adorable.

[sushi]

You said it all.... The whole story in just 5*4 lines.... Amazing...

The love that never let you both be apart from each other even for a while, those sunset that turned romantic due to the one besides you, the castles build of those dreams of a live ahead together in a relationship, vows and promises to be taken....

The romantic moments lived together and the magic of love that was lost forever in some misunderstandings and words that could never be undone, would be reminded rest of the life with the moist in the eyes that wants to fall off once and for all but the pity is it would take it so long till the life sustains...

Thanks for sharing your amazing write.... I would remember this one.....

[rwar ish me]

This is very lovely,
First loves are alway so sweet.
Very powerful write
Its well written.
~Amai

[tk]

awww.. that's so sad... (i know the feeling..) they say that first love really hurts, and it hurts so bad. :( wonderfully written!

"it’s hard to deal with the overflowing pain in my heart" --> ouchness.. :(

[Dancing in time]

was a very nice poem :)

[C.A.Jordon]

well done.

[Boldpen]

A really great poem. Taking us to corridors from being in a lot of love till its breakdown.
Beautiful and heart touching. The way it was presented in was very pretty.
Just loved the flow and expressions.
Nicely done.

[paparapapa]

Sweet. :) Some more editing though. But great poem. Loved it. :)