Tango

Tango portrays the desire and passion into obsession, Suspicion and jealousy into violent actions, anger and betrayal into broken trust. If there's no trust to each other there's no love.

You fill my heart with pure desire
you put both my heart and soul in fire
You hold me so tight, all I can feel is the passion
And now you are my greatest obsession 

Your charms drives everyone mad
You gave your love to the night
You don’t even care whether it is good or bad
You just walk there in the red light

my suspicions lead to my violent actions
Causing me to lose all your attractions
The grim in my heart becomes bigger
as you replaced me with another

I trusted you wholeheartedly

Your attention to be mine only, that’s all I need
But now you have just betrayed me

your flirtatious act makes my wounds bleed

you gave yourself to others which I can’t stand
you let her hands upon your hands
Your soft lips caressing her skin
you do everything you want even if it is a sin

Can’t you hear my heart cries?
this jealousy I feel, I can no longer hide
I was a fool for always believing
when your love is all about deceiving

 

Author's Note

I used the genre of the Argentine Tango in this poem..I love ballroom dancing yay.... whew...... I just love it...... hehehe..... honest opinions......

Reviews

[Boldpen]

This poem's main appealing aspect was its sad and touching story's presentation in a spicy form of tango. Very beautiful and wonderful execution of your creation. Well Done!!!!!!!!
The change of feelings your words displayed amazed me the most.
In beginning they showed love..... soon, it changed into regret ... then into plead.... then very artistically into jealousy .... and in the end betrayal.
Superb work with expressions and rhythm.
Good Job.

[joshua deathdealer]

I love all different types of dancing. I like you used tango as a metaphor for a relationship. Well written and a pleasure to read..xx

[BloodyMary]

Very touching, very well done, very relatable.

[Robert Haigh]

A spicy tale, told with vim and vigour! I can see this, in my mind's eye, being read aloud with a tango being danced in the background! Well done.

[tk]

i really love this poem!! such intense feelings..! a great write!! :) *A.A.*

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Your analogy worked real well!
:)

[Bella Fleur]

This is how I felt three weeks ago when my Ecuadorian romance novel cover of a boyfriend moved to california and met someone almost immediately, but now, I'm in a much happier romacnce :) Anyway, beautiful writing!

[stars are far]

this was so nice ..
and emotional ..so romantic ...loved that alot :)

[Me]

Very nicely expressed....

[C.A.Jordon]

good metaphors and similes. i felt the emotion from the poem. well done.

[Malychyte]

Sorry it took me so long to review this! It's so organized and well done! I've never delved too far into poetry so this is my first time seeing it formatted liek this and I LOVE it! Very cool and well done!! Keep at it!