My Lost Love

our memories is like a sharp knife, it's slowly slicing my life.

I tried to move on so many years
but our memories are like chains
it binds me to the past with pain
And all I can do is to shed a thousand tears

Fragile heart is bleeding
with the shock stuck in my brain

I wonder when these wounds will heal again
when my hope is slowly dying

Sulking and staying here
will never bring you back, my dear
you can never comeback to hold me

Nor your love to caress me

 

You’re my brightest Star
Fallen from the dark sky

You’ve gone to a place so far
it’s so hard to say goodbye

Author's Note

To my dearest one that I will never see again. ^^, I hope you like it.

Reviews

[pjbaker]

Im sure whoever it is they will love it

[Jordan's Back]

Oh My Goodness, I am so filled with many tears.. I'm so sorry for your loss

[stars are far]

This was really great piece
i loved that so much :D

[A Risen Heroine.]

I love it...
So sad..

~A Fallen Heroine~

[Layla Anne Massaro]

A super sad poem. There's that heartbreak that one can feel while reading this. Well-inked.

[UnOrThOdOx]

That's gorgeous.
I can practically feel the emotion rolling off in waves. :]
Nice work. :]

[Sleeping Maiden]

WAH! This poem makes me feel so sad. I love it though! Such emotions taking power here. =) I can relate so well. Great job! I love the flow and rhyme.
Awesome!!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love this write...
emotions are perfectly composed and executed :)

[sugar]

wow...ok i relate to this so well...made me tear up...good job

[tk]

ohw... emotions are outpouring. i love how this flows beautifully. :) great job on this!! ^_^
loved these lines:

I tried to move on so many years
but our memories are like chains
it binds me to the past with pain
And all I can do is to shed a thousand tears