Counting blessings

Count your blessings,for,no other virtue will make you feed in life as blessings will

Never regret a day in your life,
For good days give happiness
And Best ones give memories,
For bad days gives experiece
And worst ones give lessons
Never regret a day in your life,
For if others leave you, you have your fam,
For they see no 4am or 4 pm,
Never regret a day in your life,
For you are not that person begging for food,
Be enough privileged and thank God not being rude,
Never regret for a day in your life,
For the oppressed know what is a strife!

Reviews

[Aarea]

A happy, optimistic poem is sometimes hard to find on a writing website, but you have managed to make one. Good job! The rhyming pattern changes about halfway through however which makes it a bit of a difficult read, but I really like the idea and the beginning of the poem. Good job, you have all the makings of a great writer! :)